received march 4, 2011
Christian Wash
Will McNutt
1. The Episode meets the required goals
2. The organization is well outlined.
3. Insight is acceptable, but it would be nice to delve into personal journals.
4. The analysis and conclusion appear sound. They do not simply repeat primary documents.
5. It would be nice to use better military terminology.
6. The first sentence is fine.
7. Grammar could be refined in places.
8. Citations appear appropriate.
9. Wash puts great emphasis on responsibility and repercussion. It reads well...
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